Book Review – The Art and Craft of Writing Historical Fiction

Most writing books I’ve read can sit comfortably on a scale with Technical on one side and Inspirational on the other. James Thom’s The Art and Craft of Writing Historical Fiction definitely leans toward the latter, and that’s not necessarily a bad thing if you know what you’re getting into. There are plenty of excellent craft books out there that will serve you better on the technical aspects (Dwight V. Swain’s Techniques of the Selling Writer comes to mind).

The primary message in Thom’s book is that you’re not ready to write historical fiction until you can be there. Thom’s examples are largely based on the American frontier, because that’s what he writes about, but the idea of truly knowing the language, sights, sounds, smells and behaviors of times past apply to anything we generally call historical.

Now, I love reading historical fiction and I wouldn’t be surprised if I decided to write a book someday in the classical manner, taking fact checking and verisimilitude (a word Thom mentions often) to the nth degree. But for my current project, I’m not looking to focus on specific recorded events or people, but more in a grander sense. What’s to be found here for those of us who want to base our story in a certain time and place but not be beholden to utter historical truth?

Thom answers this in a small aside, pointing out the differences between a scholarly piece and so-called “bodice rippers”, or “factless fiction”. He takes the high road and doesn’t look down on those that prefer to write the latter. In fact, he says that those types of books are often the gateway to “the hardcore stuff” (my words, not his). So long as the writer is honest about his intentions, there is no issue here.

The wonderful thing about this book is that many of the pieces of advice Thom hands out can aid both types of writers. We can pick and choose our levels of accuracy to sustain our story and reach our target audience.

Concerning research methods, as noted by other reviewers, Thom does show a bias against abusing the computer. I think it’s a good admonishment. The Internet has been an amazing addition to the writer’s toolbox and should never be dismissed.

The problem occurs when we stop there.

There’s usually a lot more depth to be found in books and actual site visits. It’s easy to read someone else’s description of a California Sequoia or even see a photograph, but as the special individual you are, you can experience its majesty in your own way and apply that experience in your own voice. You may not even find such a tree majestic at all, but I can guarantee that standing next to one is an unparalleled experience.

Overall, Thom’s book was well written and his thoughts have certainly enticed me to pick up some of his fiction.

-Phillip

Weekly Recap – May 17th, 2013

For the most part, this week was pretty uneventful. I grabbed some tea with a good friend, read more of my research books, made some noise about why it’s taking forever and a day to write my novel, and admired my wife’s handiwork.

How about I share some great articles I came across this week?

Highlights for this weekend include:

  • Farmer’s market. Time to restock on some apples, sweet potatoes and possibly new plants for the garden.
  • Work! Wait, that’s not a highlight…

-Phillip

Fruits of our Labor 2: Beyond Thunderdome

As I droned through my office job the past two days, my wife and mother-in-law decided to don their Bob Villa beards and get their hands dirty. The result?

I’m thinking of attaching tiny weapons to the mesh walls so if the critters do get in there, they can entertain us.

“Two gardeners enter, no squirrel leaves.”

(If you’ve never seen Mad Max: Beyond Thunderdome, you must be wondering what the hell I’m going on about…)

-Phillip

I Poke Slow

As a fairly new writer, it would behoove me (sorry if I reminded you of an old boss with that phrase) to pick a topic for my novel that I’m intimately familiar with. That way, I could focus more on the actual craft of storytelling; more of an 80/20 split between writing and research.

But I didn’t.

Why not?

I think it comes down to the fact that I love to know what I don’t know. Rehashing the facts already filed away in my brain is, well, boring. Discovery engages my mind and renders passion, both of which I think are a must to write well.

I’ve always been a history buff, followed by science fiction and fantasy. When I was in college and discovered there was a genre called Alternate History, it was such a shock to me. “You mean people have been combining my favorite things all along?!”

Those are the types of stories that I love to read, and therefore love to write. They require an ample amount of information to be done right.

Readers of every genre have their expectations. Whereas science fiction aficionados will throw you out an airlock for confusing quasars with wormholes, historical fiction lovers will burn you at the stake for putting stirrups on your Scythian horses. Inconsistent magic systems in your epic fantasy? Poof, your novel ends up in the trash can.

Getting things right takes time. It’s not a job for the impatient.

Of course, there’s the trap of being debilitatingly patient. I can obviously research until I’m old and gray, because there is always more to learn about and so many ways to look at any given topic.

Why does this happen to potential authors?

There’s always the worry that getting ahead of one’s self on the writing will result in large swaths of the book that will have to be thrown out because it’s discovered that some or all of the events are logically impossible. The fact that I’ve gone through that drama before has put the fear in me.

I don’t know if there’s any real way around that. I think the answer is to write while researching, and just suck it up when it happens; to realize that it’s never easy, and thank God for that. We wouldn’t be such special, little creative flowers if writing was simple.

I leave you with a quote from successful historical fiction author, Elizabeth Crook. She has seven rules for writing historical fiction and her final axiom sums up what I’ve been going through the past few months better than I can:

Rule#7: Anticipate a Long Process. 
Historical novels usually take several years to write, as they require research at every turn. You won’t always be able to anticipate what you’ll need to know for a scene, and will constantly have to be returning to your references. This is entirely different from writing contemporary fiction.

Take, for example, in my part of the world, a trip from Austin, Texas to the nearby town of San Marcos. If you are going to write a present-day scene in which your character makes this trip, you will simply need to put him into a vehicle — a pickup, or a Volvo — and head him south for forty minutes on the flat terrain of interstate 35, passing strip malls and fields and the town of Buda. He will then take the exit marked “Wonder World”, named for a local cave and visitor’s center, and arrive in San Marcos. The only research needed to write this scene will be to drive the route yourself.

But if your character takes this journey in 1906, you will have to learn a few things before starting him out, and learn more things along the way. First of all, you need to know where the road is, and what’s on either side of it, and what kind of conveyance your character is driving. If it’s a flatbed wagon, what’s pulling it — a horse, a half-lame mule, two mules? How often do mules need water? How much traffic will there be? Any cars? What kind of food or luggage do you have along? And what if a wheel breaks, and you have to fix it, and you cut yourself with a rusty tool — how do you disinfect the cut? Do you even know about disinfection? When did people figure out where tetanus came from? And — assuming that you eventually make it to San Marcos, what’s in San Marcos, anyway? As for the Wonder World exit — when was the cave called “Wonder Cave” actually discovered?

But here is where the magic comes in: you begin to think, “Wow. The discovery of Wonder Cave. Now that would make a scene . . .” And then suddenly you have a story, and a book to write. The only problem, of course, is that you will soon find out that Wonder Cave was discovered in 1898 instead of 1906, so you will have to move your story back eight years and find out what sort of vehicles they drove in 1898 and along what road, and the rest of it, or else joggle the facts and sacrifice credibility in the name of literary license. Or ditch Wonder Cave.

Writing historical fiction is like trying to get to San Marcos when you have no car, you don’t know where the road is, and you have never in your life harnessed a half-lame mule to a flatbed wagon.

-Phillip

Godslinger

Thanks to Oliver at Literature and Libation for contributing a great piece to the Life in Skyrim series. If anyone is interested in contributing, we’re basically taking interesting screenshots from games (Skyrim in this case, but I’m open to anything) and writing some flash fiction based upon it.

I’ve come back here now, my steps bristling with just as much rage as raw power, to the place where that immortal braggart first chose me and gifted me this curse. I’m back in this foggy grotto far in the rocky bowels of the mount to teach a god what it means to burn. To bring the fury home.

As my will was exhausted at the end of a sword point and my people were forced to the gallows in the name of some distant Emperor, She called me here, like a siren upon the rock sending whispers on the icy wind, luring me to the mountain with promises of redemption and power over those Imperial dogs. Her gaze pierced and saw my weakness, digesting it, understanding it, bridling it.

This altar is my coffin and my cradle. On it I died and because of it I am reborn. She made my frailty my advantage, replaced the weak fleshy sinew of a fleeing coward with the screaming anger of an untamed storm. I look the same except for the singed blue that sparks in my eyes. My blood buzzes. The Breton under the cloak is but a shape, something to give the infinite a form.

She cast me out where I awoke in the snow, naked, steaming. A single purpose surged in my mind, and with fists clenched I marched back to that spot, dotted with smoldering ruins and charred corpses. Their camp was nothing but one massive conduit; the lightning that exploded from me arcing from chain mail to gladius, from belt buckle to any and every exposed piece of steel or iron.

Their bodies burned with unholy light, unearthly blue beaming from their eyes and mouths in a final cry of agonizing death. In a flash as quick as that first spark from a piece of flint, I
exacted my thunderous revenge. I expected the power to leave me then, to descend back into the mountain and ascend from the altar into the open womb of sky and god, now that my will was done.

But my rage did not subside. My anger was not satiated. I could not shake the desire to remove the taint of Imperium that had tattooed the land with pillaged farms and murdered families. For an entire year I rolled across the plains of the north, a living quiver of cobalt bolts, Boethiah’s wrath wrapped in a brown fur cloak.

And now I’m back. The Imperial camp outside the cave could not have been a coincidence. The Daedra don’t dabble in coincidence. She either wants me here, or another has set me against her, turned the weapon on its master.

I’ve grown powerful in my wandering. Today, one of us dies. Today, those storm clouds on the horizon are more than just a coming rain. Today, those fires in heaven will burn blue.

Fruits of our Labor Lost

Well, that was tragic. Overnight, one berry totally gone and the other left with teeth marks. I hope this isn’t some sort of metaphorical omen about my marriage. Or maybe it’s somewhat literal… At some point, a giant squirrel will eat me and just take a nibble out of my wife.

Any tips on garden defense? A moat and a drawbridge?

-Phillip